Frank O'Hara's "PERSONISM: A MANIFESTO"

Just came across this by a poet I love - worth reading. (MS)

PERSONISM: A MANIFESTO

Everything is in the poems, but at the risk of sounding like the poor wealthy man’s Allen Ginsberg I will write to you because I just heard that one of my fellow poets thinks that a poem of mine that can’t be got at one reading is because I was confused too. Now, come on. I don’t believe in god, so I don’t have to make elaborately sounded structures. I hate Vachel Lindsay, always have; I don’t even like rhythm, assonance, all that stuff. You just go on your nerve. If someone’s chasing you down the street with a knife you just run, you don’t turn around and shout, “Give it up! I was a track star for Mineola Prep.”

That’s for the writing poems part. As for their reception, suppose you’re in love and someone’s mistreating (mal aimŽ) you, you don’t say, “Hey, you can’t hurt me this way, I care!” you just let all the different bodies fall where they may, and they always do may after a few months. But that’s not why you fell in love in the first place, just to hang onto life, so you have to take your chances and try to avoid being logical. Pain always produces logic, which is very bad for you.

I’m not saying that I don’t have practically the most lofty ideas of anyone writing today, but what difference does that make? They’re just ideas. The only good thing about it is that when I get lofty enough I’ve stopped thinking and that’s when refreshment arrives.

But how can you really care if anybody gets it, or gets what it means, or if it improves them. Improves them for what? For death? Why hurry them along? Two many poets act like a middle-aged mother trying to get her kids to eat too much cooked meat, and potatoes with drippings (tears). I don’t give a damn whether they eat or not. Forced feeding leads to excessive thinness (effete). Nobody should experience anything they don’t need to, if they don’t need poetry bully for them. I like the movies too. And after all, only Whitman and Crane and Williams, of the American poets, are better than the movies. As for measure and other technical apparatus, that’s just common sense: if you’re going to buy a pair of pants you want them to be tight enough so everyone will want to go to bed with you. There’s nothing metaphysical about it. Unless, of course, you flatter yourself into thinking that what you’re experiencing is “yearning.”

Abstraction in poetry, which Allen [Ginsberg] recently commented on in It Is, is intriguing. I think it appears mostly in the minute particulars where decision is necessary. Abstraction (in poetry, not in painting) involves personal removal by the poet. For instance, the decision involved in the choice between “the nostalgia of the infinite” and “the nostalgia for the infinite” defines an attitude towards degree of abstraction. The nostalgia of the infinite representing the greater degree of abstraction, removal, and negative capability (as in Keats and MallarmŽ). Personisms, a movement which I recently founded and which nobody knows about, interests me a great deal, being so totally opposed to this kind of abstract removal that it is verging on a true abstraction for the first time, really, in the history of poetry. Personism is to Wallace Stevens what la poŽsie pure was to BŽranger. Personism has nothing to do with philosophy, it’s all art. It does not have to do with personality or intimacy, far from it! But to give you a vague idea, one of its minimal aspects is to address itself to one person (other than the poet himself), thus evoking overtones of love without destroying love’s life—giving vulgarity, and sustaining the poet’s feelings towards the poem while preventing love from distracting him into feeling about the person. That’s part of Personism. It was founded by me after lunch with LeRoi Jones on August 27, 1959, a day in which I was in love with someone (not Roi, by the way, a blond). I went back to work and wrote a poem for this person. While I was writing it I was realizing that if I wanted to I could use the telephone instead of writing the poem, and so Personism was born. It’s a very exciting movement which will undoubtedly have lots of adherents. It puts the poem squarely between the poet and the person, Lucky Pierre style, and the poem is correspondingly gratified. The poem is at last between two persons instead of two pages. In all modesty, I confess that it may be the death of literature as we know it. While I have certain regrets, I am still glad I got there before Alain Robbe-Grillet did. Poetry being quicker and surer than prose, it is only just that poetry finish literature off. For a time people thought that Artaud was going to accomplish this, but actually, for all their magnificence, his polemical writings are not more outside literature than Bear Mountain is outside New York State. His relation is no more astounding than Debuffet’s to painting.

What can we expect of Personism? (This is getting good, isn’t it?) Everything but we won’t get it. It is too new, too vital a movement to promise anything. But it, like Africa, is on the way. The recent propagandists for technique on the one hand, and for content on the other, had better watch out.

Frank O’Hara
September 3, 1959

Sunday in the Park - preliminary thoughts

I haven't heard or seen the new Roundabout production yet. I hope to see it in the next few weeks.

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So I can't really comment on Jason Carr’s new orchestration. I'm sure the choice of 5 pieces instead of the original 11 was dictated by economic considerations (as my 11 piece band in the 80's was also sized down from the standard Broadway orchestra of 25 because of budgetary considerations.)

I have heard that the original production in London was prepared for a pub theatre - the equivalent of our Off-Off-Broadway. I'm sure his 5 piece band was just the right size for that venue.

(In the same vein, Assassins was done at Playwright's Horizons in the 1990's with just 3 pieces for an Off-Broadway tryout. But when produced by the Roundabout in 2004 it was orchestrated for a 13 piece band. One has to wonder why the Roundabout didn't see the need to expand the band for the change in venue this time.)

If there's a guilty party here, it's the person (producer?) who felt that Sondheim's magnificent score was not worth the money it would cost to hire 11 musicians to play for audiences paying top dollar for tickets.

A new production should create a fresh approach to the physical production, sometimes including new orchestrations. But usually the new orchestrations for a revival are nothing more than an attempt to save running costs by using less musicians. This discussion should have been about Jason Carr's different choices with the 11 piece orchestra he should have been given.

And I'm sure when I hear his work, I will be appreciating how well he did with limited means - a feat I've often tried to pull off myself.

It's the style, stupid.

You know, I think I’m sort of off base in that last entry. (But I’ll leave it there to keep myself aware of how easy it is to be wrong when spouting about one’s work ... and who’s reading this anyway?)

What’s remarkable about Next to Normal is its integration of newer musical styles into the musical theatre vocabulary. Tom Kitt and Brian Yorkey’s artfulness at invoking various pop styles - funk, folk-rock, arena rock, punk (and the fact that it doesn’t sound like outsiders imitating those styles) is very special.

Plenty of other composers have played with style variety. Lloyd Webber does it a lot - Superstar has its odd meter song, it’s folk ballad, it’s jazz tune - and that became the nature of many concept albums - some meant to be plays, some just meant to be albums. But sometimes the variety of styles serves more as a Chinese menu, one from column A, one from column B ... they didn’t really contribute to the play - they are there to keep the ear entertained. But I think it’s different here - I think there’s playwrighting going on through the use of style.

As I’ve written elsewhere in this blog, I think rock does not have a wide emotional range. But within that range it does quite well at expressing rage, frustration, scorn, ecstasy, etc. The authors have used musical style to hit those emotions with real truthfulness. And they don’t make the mistake of trying to use pop styles for moments where it wouldn’t work.

As orchestrater I had so much fun crossing back and forth over the boundary lines of style - always aware of what world I was in at the particular moment, but always ready to travel along as the authors jumped over the fence into new territory. (Ouch - metaphors are dangerous - best left to real writers.)

Am I gushing? Of course - it’s previews right now, and I’m in the flush of loving a show I just finished orchestrating, that others have not yet started to rip apart.

rhythm & groove in the musical theatre - "Next to Normal"

I’m finishing work on a wonderful show, “Next to Normal” by Tom Kitt and Brian Yorkey. And it brings up a question I keep asking myself - how do grooves affect our ability to get hear lyric information - does music that makes us want to move (or dance) stop us from listening? Does it stop us from using the part of our brain that follows plot and character? And do lyrics need to be different for deeply rhythmic music than they need to be for lyrical music?

“Next to Normal” is interesting in that it has both - groove music in a strong rock beat and lyrical, theatrical music (still in contemporary pop styles, but without drums and bass laying down a solid rhythm.) I think Brian Yorkey’s lyric writing style varies right along with Tom Kitt’s music - the rhythm numbers have simpler language and ‘pop rhymes’ (the rules are less stringent for rhyming in pop - you can get away with more.) The non-pop numbers can bear more complex thoughts in their lyrics. And there is a good deal of writing in a folk/rock vein that stands somewhere between the two extremes.

Interestingly the heightened ‘poetry’ that a pop lyric allows sneaks into some of Brian’s theatre lyrics here - he can get away with it because the various styles are standing side by side, coming out of the mouths of the same characters.

But with rock I sense the audience getting excited about what’s going on in a dramatic situation where traditional theatrical music wouldn’t have the same effect - the rock pulse has them moving and getting excited as if at a concert. They ARE listening and hearing the lyrics - but now on a physical level as much as an intellectual one. And as they listen to to hard rhythms under the music, they listen almost as participants in the performance.

I think this is a show worth seeing - of course I would say that having worked on it. But besides being great theatre, it’s also an interesting step in how rock grooves are becoming part of the language of musical theatre and changing the nature of the plays themselves. Play as ritual? A more physical feeling of catharsis?

If nothing else, some of the rules seem to be changing ...